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This was one of my
favorite short stories, so I'm working on pumping this into a
novel. This is probably my only good experience with a Third-person
Limited POV, too. And what a happy, cheerful story this is! ¬_¬;;
Gabriel
blinked calmly at the sight, contrary to the commotion of the
students around him. Fraternity drunks cheered on, making encouraging
chants, while the girls all seemed to have mixed emotions about
everything, especially when the blood spattered on the cement
every so often. A series of sickening thuds sounded in unison
with a muffled grunt, and a pattern-esque cracking balanced out
the rythmic motions of violence.
A
young man collapsed to the ground a second time, but immediately
pushed himself up again. A trailed snapping sound, like cracking
ice, repeated itself as the fallen student stumbled to hold his
position for an attack. The sound reminded Gabriel of the crunching
of chips, and his stomach growled. He'd have to step in soon
if he wanted to get any food later.
The
young man couldn't have been much older than Gabriel, but his
face had been torn and bruised with such sadistic treatment,
that his face seemed wrinkled, as if it had aged fifty years.
He punched forward clumsily, missing both his attackers, and
the two opposing students resumed their rythmic brutality. Finally,
the victim collapsed to the ground, without the strength to fight
back. Still, his attackers continued to kick their victim, spreading
more blood onto the concrete.
Stepping
into the small ring of the fight, Gabriel was met immediately
with a quick shove and a strong punch to his jaw. His lips parted,
and he tasted fresh-flowing blood in his mouth. Gabriel blinked,
and the crowd pushed and stretched away in a sunburst towards
the sky. Only darkness could be seen as the light dimmed in Gabriel's
eyes. The image of the two aggressors warped itself, twisting
and expanding and contracting. Gabriel's left arm went numb.
The
darkness swirled, and Gabriel dreamt of black light swirling
with crimson clouds in ripples of infinite speculars, like sunlight
bouncing off steel.
Ambulance
sirens wailed nearby, and Gabriel found himself collapsed across
the sidewalk, without the energy to move. A crew of police officers
surrounded him. As he was lifted off the ground, a puzzled expression
dominated his face, and he glanced to the nearby ambulances,
watching the emergency teams lift up the body of a student.
Blood
spattered over this student's torn, white, button-down T-shirt,
and a stream of blood still oozed freely from his mouth, which
had been forced open by a broken jaw. The student's face was
badly beaten, eyes swollen and sunken, blood bending around the
bags of his eyes and wrinkles of his swollen bruises. The small
space between his brows was blackened and bevelled and the skin
crushed, the bone beneath shattered. The blood trickled down
over his left arm and trailed to the cement below him.
Gabriel
glanced to his own arm, realizing a moist sensation on his hand.
Deep crimson and black fluids trickled down his knuckles and
dripped with every step of movement.
"W-what
the hell happened?
*
*
Gabriel
sat in a plastic blue bucket chair, his head over his knees,
staring at a semicrumpled sheet of paper. From the various eyewitness
reports, the police eventually made the most accurate descriptions
of what had happened, and at Gabriel's request, gave him a copy.
Gabriel was shocked at its contents. Nothing came to his mind
while reading it. The last thing he remembered was Lucas' appearance
during the fight, and the blood that had sunk into the cement.
You
stepped in. A voice whispered in the back of his head.
"I
. . . stepped in . . . ?" He whispered to himself under
his breath. "That's right, I remember that. I pushed into
the fight, and . . . and John? John punched me. But, I don't
remember any-"
The
blood.
Images flashed through Gabriel's mind.
The same images that had flashed into his head the second he
tasted his own blood.
"My
blood . . . I remember the taste, and then . . . that's it.
Gabriel leaned back into the chair
and closed his eyes. Instant throbbing pain tunneled into the
sides of his head. He opened his eyes immediately in alert, and
his sight was filled with unreal images. Flames sprouted from
wooden doorways, licking against the framing, shaded in a deep
red. One of the doorways opened, and a black shadow stepped out,
its eyes glaring white, its skin shimmering with obsidian plasma.
Gabriel forced his eyes shut once more. The visions stopped.
It
was Dr. Lucanius. The psychiatrist they had assigned him was
an annoying man, Gabriel though. For once, his own twisted hallucination
was fairly accurate: A shadowy, lifeless, malevolent creature.
Dr. Lucanius sat in a chair opposite Gabriel, opening a manila
folder, and sifting through hordes of papers. He pulled out one
packet of information, returning the folder to its place in a
black briefcase beside his chair.
"Gabriel,
do you know what this packet is?"
"Yeah,
my psychiatric records, right?" Gabriel favored speaking
poetically when talking to the doctor, in an attempt to throw
the doctor into a rage, but today was not a good day.
"Yes,"
Lucanius growled, "These are the reports on your mental
condition, collected police reports, notes taken during our management
sessions, and the results from various psychiatric tests. Normally,
we would never release this information to a patient, but your
case forces me to comply to different means."
"Yes."
"You
short-amnesia connected with this upsetting event clearly shows
that you have an emotionally-managed memory. Testing confirms
that you are a manic-depressive, and also that you are serverely
detached. The witnesses mentioned that you had no emotional response
to the savage beating of your roommate. Either you hate your
roommate, or you are naturally adjusted to violence, as if bloody
massacres are an everyday sort to you. The incident you were
involved in, by eyewitness accounts, said that you seemed to
become more and more violent at the sight and taste of blood.
You also mentioned vague remembrance of hallucinations, which
may be a serious sign of illness. I've never personally seen
anything like this, and I've only heard of a similar state twice."
The doctor seemed fascinated with a disease.
"Is
there a term, then?"
"Well
. . . yes," the doctor shrugged, laying the papers flat
on his lap. "You have berserky psychopathy, bloodlust, and
you avoid the consequences of reality by hallucination. What's
worse, and what we cannot determine, is that if you have had
this disease for an extended period of time, you may have seriously
injured, even killed people, and you would have never known about
it."
Gabriel
pulled himself out of his strange trance and into startling realization.
He hated being trapped inside buildings, and an asylum or prison
was just that. "Then what's going to happen to me?"
Gabriel questioned hesitantly.
"Like
I said, we cannot determine that you have murdered anyone, or
ever done this before. You are expelled from the university campus
and are to be assigned to the nearest mental institution."
The
two exchanged glances, and Lucanius passed Gabriel three papers,
prewritten prescriptions for various drugs. Later on the same
day, the school council meeting informed Gabriel of an official
expulsion notice. About a half hour later, two officers arrived
to escort Gabriel to the institution.
As
Gabriel left the building, he couldn't express anything. His
face was blank, and forgotten images sped through his mind. The
face of a man chiking and gasping for air from a shattered esophagus.
The look in the faces of two teenage punks, blood trinkling from
their hairlines. Hundreds of similar pictures flashed through
his mind, each incident progressively less violent, and finally,
the last image, the least violent of all: The image of a college
student named Kyler, his right eye swollen inwards in a sunken
cavity, a small slit of pink peeking out of bloody wrinkles.
And his shattered nose, cascading blood, forehead dotted with
four black-bruised welts; signs of bone fracture. The images
passed and faded. Gabriel closed his eyes.
The
clouds turned pink, then red, and the entire world was crimson.
And Gabriel blinked again, and his memory was cleansed, his past
forgotten once more. He hadn't even noticed the police car was
almost four miles from teh school. Through the window, monocolor
leaves took flight from brisk Fall winds, many sticking to serrated
blades of grass.
Winter
was coming soon.
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